We spent some time in class today talking about paragraphs, their mechanics, and their organization. If you went to school in the U.S., this should be nothing new for you. However, if you grew up in another country, this is probably an area where you need more practice.
Take a look at my sample paragraph below. It needs to be corrected! Respond to this post with a comment about something that needs to be corrected, OR you can re-write the paragraph with corrections. my name is Jenny. I teach ESL and ABE classes at my local community college. I have a dog and a cat, but I don't have any children. my husband works in a factory he works in the lab doing quality assurance and research. It's a pretty simple paragraph because I want you to focus on the mechanics of the writing instead of the content. Comment with your corrections, and I'll post the "correct" paragraph after Thursday's class. Keep working hard! -Teacher Jenny
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